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Something I Never Had
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Something I Never Had |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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You walked away < !signature-->you took my heart no choice was given you tore me apart There was no good-bye you never cared the words I hate you were all that you shared With all the tears I've cried and all the losses felt you burned my heart just to watch it melt My love for you is always here but your constant rejection is what I fear I can live without you that wasnt my choice to make but knowing that you hate me is too much for me to take By birth right you're my father but I'll NEVER call you dad cause the love you should have given is something I never had... ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ [This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Many hugs Echo. The word hate is cruel, isn't it? Well written piece. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Echo....nice bash there gal...sad though..but understandable...... |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Now ya got me crying!  It was so beautiful and describes my own father so perfectly. I know just what you mean with every word in this. It definately deserves to go in my favorites folder.  ~Jess~ |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Severn...Thanks for the hugs...Yes, the word hate is very cruel, and when it comes from your own father, its even crueler. Toe...Thanks, I tried to make it as nice as possible Jess...Didn't mean to make you cry hun, and I am sure it describes a lot of fathers, which, all I can say, really sucks. It does suck doesn't it?? *hugs* to you ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh those words hurt to the core! Echo it's his loss, one that he will come to regret someday! You know we all love ya! HUGS girl!  <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Well, if you knew anything about my father you would probably agree with me when I say, he will never regret it. He doesn't care! Maybe his loss, but it's also mine as well. I don't know, tis a long story and to make it short, he's an @$$, who cares nothing for me and wants nothign to do with me, and wants me out of his family. ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Echo, the hurt in this is so palpable. I feel for you honey. As you said, it's your loss too. I pray that someday you will find peace and forgiveness, for your sake, not his. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Tara...I have found forgiveness for him, but I will never forget. As far as peace...I am trying! Thanks for reading and for your comment! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Echo fathers can be the cruelest things we know. My dad never said he hated me, he used other ways to make his hate known. It took me a long time to find peace, but I did, and you will. Special (((( Hugs )))) coming your way, and one of these too. B Gravitt |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thanks for the hugs and for the comment. ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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