Open Poetry #4 |
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Jingle Bells??? |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio ![]() |
Dashing through the snow In the family Chevrolet. To the mall I go, My credit card's at bay. Cash machines will ring As the clerk's all beg, invite. Now I'm bound to cry and sing That money song tonight... Oh, Visa Gold, Visa Gold How'm I gonna pay? Oh what fun it is to spend My monthy wage this way! (Hey??!!) Visa Gold, Visa Gold How much? I can't say. My wallet's smokin' and I'm 'bout To faint here dead away. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sally - That's so cute. Thanks for lighting up my evening. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
smiling here... (as he reaches to check that his wallet is still there) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
LOL.....How glad I am I don't have a GOLD CARD. I liked this a lot ![]() Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Jingle pockets more like. ![]() very nice - and all too true for many...! |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Marge, happy to oblige. ![]() Mike, I'm glad this brought a smile. (hope your wallet's still intact) Sir Knight, I wish I didn't...hehehe Severn, Great name! ![]() Thank you all! ![]() [This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL...thank you Sally, sure needed that laugh today |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sally, Nice parody, enjoyed the read. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sally: Cute.. ![]() HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... great one, Sally! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
LOL ![]() ![]() A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is really a sad song, Sally!I plan to be singing 5 or 6 stanzas of it before this season is over (with tears in my eyes as I hum!) A real cutie! ![]() To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Thank you all!! ![]() Balladeer, I'm ok..wouldn't call myself a cutie. *g* ![]() [This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This has got to be the funniest poem yet! Oh, my sides!!! ![]() Denise |
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