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Sally S.
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0 posted 1999-12-07 11:57 PM


Dashing through the snow
In the family Chevrolet.
To the mall I go,
My credit card's at bay.

Cash machines will ring
As the clerk's all beg, invite.
Now I'm bound to cry and sing
That money song tonight...

Oh, Visa Gold, Visa Gold
How'm I gonna pay?
Oh what fun it is to spend
My monthy wage this way!
(Hey??!!)

Visa Gold, Visa Gold
How much?  I can't say.
My wallet's smokin' and I'm 'bout
To faint here dead away.

© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-12-08 12:01 PM


Sally -
That's so cute.
Thanks for lighting up my evening.


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Mike
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2 posted 1999-12-08 12:37 PM


smiling here... (as he reaches to check that his wallet is still there)
First__Knight
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3 posted 1999-12-08 01:30 AM


LOL.....How glad I am I don't have a GOLD CARD.  I liked this a lot  

 Share what you are for you are what you share


Severn
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4 posted 1999-12-08 05:25 AM


Jingle pockets more like.  
very nice - and all too true for many...!

Sally S.
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5 posted 1999-12-08 11:07 AM


Marge, happy to oblige.  

Mike, I'm glad this brought a smile. (hope your wallet's still intact)

Sir Knight, I wish I didn't...hehehe

Severn, Great name!      

Thank you all!    
Any other sugestions for a title for this jingle?

[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-08-1999).]

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-12-08 11:12 AM


ROFL...thank you Sally, sure needed that laugh today
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-12-08 11:22 AM


Sally,
Nice parody, enjoyed the read.

RainbowGirl
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8 posted 1999-12-08 11:24 AM


Sally: Cute..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...


suthern
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9 posted 1999-12-08 11:53 AM


ROFL... great one, Sally!
Pepper
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10 posted 1999-12-08 03:07 PM


LOL    

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



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11 posted 1999-12-08 03:58 PM


This is really a sad song, Sally!I plan to be singing 5 or 6 stanzas of it before this season is over (with tears in my eyes as I hum!)

A real cutie!


 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


Sally S.
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12 posted 1999-12-08 08:28 PM


Thank you all!!    

Balladeer, I'm ok..wouldn't call myself a cutie. *g*      Thanks again.




[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-08-1999).]

Denise
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13 posted 1999-12-08 09:41 PM


This has got to be the funniest poem yet! Oh, my sides!!!    Fabulous!!

 Denise



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