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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-12-07 11:08 PM




Forgive me for asking, but
how did you lose your
everlasting glow.
You used to shine so
bright that you lit up
my life.

I'll always remember you
as the light of my life.
The person who made me
smle in the worst of times.
As the one who taught me
that love was true.

I'll always think of you
as a best friend.
A loving and tender
embrace on cold nights.
As an angel who guided me
through the pain and hate.

I'll always recall you
by your face and voice.
Your calming words spoken
to ease all of my worries.
By your cheerful expressions
upon your loving face.

I'll always remember you
as the one I once loved.


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-12-07 11:14 PM


Very melancholy, Lynn, and,as they say, you will do anything for one you once loved....except love them again.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-07 11:40 PM


Very sad, Lynn. Yet beautifully done. You are certainly a talented writer.

 Denise



Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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3 posted 1999-12-08 05:37 AM


Sad indeed.
Poignant fits it best I think.
Lovely writing, Lynn.

Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
4 posted 1999-12-08 06:49 PM



Thank you all for the nice comments. Christmas is always the saddest holiday for me. Thanks again.


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

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