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Open Poetry #4

What She Said

Lolita
Junior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America

0 posted 1999-11-09 11:58 AM

What she said disturbed
the word she used
to fuse the thoughts
she heard

What she wore concealed
the sin she thought
she saw but
let it in

What she cried for was
release her eyes
sealed souls in
gracious sleep

Where she ran no one
could tell but where she stayed
she stayed in
hell

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 1999-11-09 12:16 PM

Welcome to Passions...an entry with a flourish.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-11-09 12:21 PM

Interesting, welcome to passions

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-11-09 12:55 PM

Lolita,
Enjoyed the read,
Welcome.

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

4 posted 1999-11-09 01:26 PM

wow, like this a lot, talks to me, it does, great job

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

5 posted 1999-11-09 05:40 PM

I...liked...this.....and... WELCOME...to...Passions...

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 11-09-1999).]

Aurora's Fire
Junior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 28
Oshawa, Ontario, Canada

6 posted 1999-11-09 05:46 PM

I liked.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-11-10 03:33 AM

Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 1999-11-10 09:52 PM

Welcome to the family.

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