Open Poetry #4 |
Fall In Love Lovers |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When will I meet my fall in love woman, and when we meet will she know I'm her man. What if I met you and I was ready to explore my feelings, could I presume you were also interested and willing. How could I reveal to her who I am to meet her satisfaction, and if I did I hope the results would be a good reaction. I can honestly say I am attracted to at least one woman each day, but when I try to talk to them they just ignore me and walk away. And I know that initiating a relationship means I need to take some action, but falling in Love, oh my goodness, it works best with a mutual attraction. There are lots of people out there looking for a relationship that's real, yet, they're only willing to step forward when they meet their ideal. That would be the special person that has always been there somewhere in our mind, the one we've hoped and dreamed and maybe prayed for time after time. And why am I thinking about Love right away, It's always best to start out as friends anyway. Take some time to look and talk before you touch and feel, as you explore each others personality to see what common interests are revealed. And if the chemistry is there you'll both soon discover, that you are a brand new pair of fall in love lovers. @1999 James |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Awe wow...am I glad I read this !! There is so much truth in this piece! It certainly deserves to go back up to the top! You said it all - when you said, "take some time to look and talk, before you touch and feel..." I do believe that's where most relationships go wrong nowadays....people get in too big of a hurry to jump in feet first, they forget to try and "know" the person before sharing intimacy....What good is one without the other, really? Fabulous piece you have here, I hope others take time to read the truth in your words!! Thank you for sharing!! And I see you're fairly new, so a big Welcome to you!! - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
i love it when a guy actually feels the same way i do about this type of thing...and you know, your someone is out there |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
How nice! I do love the way you think. Now, we need a few hundred thousand others to read this and take notes. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I'm in agreement as well! True words they are! And a big Welcome from me too! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you FemmeFatale, Rachel, Sally, and WhtDove. It is really a blessing to have someone understand and appreciate a poem that I have written from my heart. James |
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paperguardian Junior Member
since 1999-12-07
Posts 25 |
This one really touched me, your expression of defining love is powerful and fresh. More people need to think like you . Wonderful poem!!!! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Beautiful! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you paperguardian and saxoness for reading my poem and for the nice comments. And thanks for the beautiful red rose saxoness. Paperguardian when I read you name it reminded me of my old friend Hector in Calif. He loved to give his friends nicknames and we mutually knew a girl named Gayla...so they had these paper products called Gayla..and so he gave her the nickname "Gayla paper towel". Another friend was Cappy and he nicknamed her "cap pistol". I used to get a kick out of some of the names he would come up with. Just some fun in my past. James |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I'm glad I read this one! It's very true. Thanks for reminding me that there are good men out there! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, James. I enjoyed it! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you tulip and denise for reading and commenting about my poem. Tulip I thank you for your nice impression of me. This poem was written out of my frustration to find a mutual attraction. Usually I like a woman and she isn't that attracted to me and sometimes a woman likes me but I'm not attracted to her. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
One way she will know you is through your poetry, It is revealing.Love happens, though when you least expect it. Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
James, so much truth, so much emotion, so great! Thank you for sharing with us! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Liz and Echo for your nice comments. Liz, I guess love is going to be happening real soon because I have about given up and although I do have some hope I don't expect it to happen. Every girl I'm crazy about only desires or is available for friendship. I think this friendship thing is a growing experience for me, and I'll admit I was never good at that..so probably this is a wonderful time for me to improve. Echo you sure know how to make a guy feel good. I wrote this after I began to reflect on what type of woman fit my definition of ideal and realizing that it is so hard to find a mutual attraction. James |
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