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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-12-06 10:31 PM


Just Before Sunrise
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Early with the morning dew,
earlier than the sun's first ray,
just before the sun peeks through,
you come into my day.

In through my mind and soul
you enter my heart.
Our love is never old
and we will never part.

For as long as the sun does rise,
you can rest assured,
you are in my hearts eyes
and I am allured.

Awed by your beauty true,
held within your gaze,
surely a day without you
would be just a purple haze.

Long before the sunrise,
long before the day peeks through,
I hold you with such surprise
and we begin anew.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
First__Knight
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1 posted 1999-12-06 10:40 PM


Again this man who has brought these feelings to bear Marge.....hehe  Where does he hide    Very nice in deed
Eloise
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2 posted 1999-12-06 11:14 PM


Lovely poem. I enjoyed this one Marge.
Denise
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3 posted 1999-12-06 11:30 PM


Oh, Marge, I love this! Reminds me of the verse 'Early will I seek Him' (something like that...I'm not good a memorization) This really spoke to my heart.

 Denise



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4 posted 1999-12-06 11:52 PM


There is indeed a lucky man walking around somewhere. Nicely done, Marge.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 1999-12-07 07:02 AM


First_Knight -  He is everywhere.

Eloise - Thanks for liking.

Denise - Love your reads.

Balladeer - Aw, shucks !  You're just saying that.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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6 posted 1999-12-07 10:03 AM


Romantically beautiful.I really enjoyed this  
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