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Just Before Sunrise
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Just Before Sunrise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Just Before Sunrise ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Early with the morning dew, earlier than the sun's first ray, just before the sun peeks through, you come into my day. In through my mind and soul you enter my heart. Our love is never old and we will never part. For as long as the sun does rise, you can rest assured, you are in my hearts eyes and I am allured. Awed by your beauty true, held within your gaze, surely a day without you would be just a purple haze. Long before the sunrise, long before the day peeks through, I hold you with such surprise and we begin anew. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Again this man who has brought these feelings to bear Marge.....hehe Where does he hide  Very nice in deed |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Lovely poem. I enjoyed this one Marge. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Marge, I love this! Reminds me of the verse 'Early will I seek Him' (something like that...I'm not good a memorization) This really spoke to my heart. Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is indeed a lucky man walking around somewhere. Nicely done, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
First_Knight - He is everywhere. Eloise - Thanks for liking. Denise - Love your reads. Balladeer - Aw, shucks ! You're just saying that. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Romantically beautiful.I really enjoyed this |
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