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The Day of the Chickadee... |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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Melodious silence Greets my morn As icy prisms suspended at my pane Refract the advent Of a freshly fallen fantasy, Mottled only by the Whimsical fluttering of A chickadee On undaunted wing. My reverie envelops me In a vast blanket of Glistening unsullied snow, An illusory mask for winter's Sallow earth beneath. Still waters stand In frigorific splendor as Evergreens bough their ice-laden limbs In Reverence To the glacial touch of Nature's enchanted wand. E'er the day of the vernal crocus, The chickadee and I Shall appertain This pristine dream As one. [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 12-07-1999).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So beautiful is this melodious silence. Very atmespheric and rich. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
 So Beautiful, Nan! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow Nan wow! Go freeverse! Love it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, freeverse from Nan? This is a new forum  Beautiful words Nan. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, my Passionate friends - Every once in awhile I find an urge to write something in free verse - LOL - just to prove I can do it...... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Exquisite. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Nan this is stunning....gorgeous work, I love it.  *Krista Knutson* "I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I am frigorifically impressed.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nan, this is wonderful! So beautiful! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Nan, this was really beautiful....I agree with everyone on the freeverse thing from you! Wow ! I really like all these new fonts, and the one you chose is one of my favorites, however, did you notice it makes it kind of hard to read? Or am I just a goob with poor eyesight !!?? LOL I kind of had to strain to figure out some of the words, although it was well worth it !! - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I like your style I like your smile. I like your chickadee. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love you all..... *smooooooooches* ...and I have to agree with you PFF - I tried to change the font after I posted - and felt pretty dumb that I couldn't figure it out....  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
like this, course I am partial to freestyle anyway lol...great poem though...so many of mine are about how *I* feel...like this one that is about nature, but also brings out *you* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ This is simply beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
So ok ok,, you changed my mind about free verse. This is splendid. I thoroughly enjoyed each exquisite line. Linda M. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm smiling big smiles - That I could make anyone change their minds about free verse... .. I'm a die-hard rhymer...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief - Nan does free style? And well too! Loved this Nan. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to read this every so often to remember you can actually do this I am sending it up for a re-read because as you know, I can. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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