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Open Poetry #4

Delighted

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-12-06 06:23 PM

Delighted

Dress my lucid dreams
with your eloquent fantasies
Dress my inner self
with your knowledgeable wealth
Dress my gentle beating heart
with your tender beating heart
Dress my absent mind
with your remembering kind
Dress my hungry eyes
with chocolate cream pies
Dress my scentsational nose
with a fragrant lavender rose
Dress my tasting lips
with creamy sombrero sips
and delighted I'll always be.

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

1 posted 1999-12-06 07:21 PM

oh I love this, what wonderful images it provokes

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-06 10:35 PM

So delightful! I love this Gloria!

Denise

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 1999-12-06 10:44 PM

Lovely!

Corinne

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-12-06 10:48 PM

This is great, dreamer. Scentsational, huh? You've given birth to a new word. I love it!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-12-07 10:23 AM

Whooo Hooo...I find this one very pleasing

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

6 posted 1999-12-09 10:57 AM

I thank all of you for reading, glad you liked it. I wrote this as I was driving home from work, made the ride seem much shorter.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-12-09 01:17 PM

Lost Dreamer,
Were you in formal dress? Enjoyed.

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