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Out Of The Noise Of Noon
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Out Of The Noise Of Noon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Out Of The Noise Of Noon ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 So many sounds surround me. Bells ringing, horns blowing, tires screeching, people chatting. A time for quiet serenity seeks audience with me. I retreat to the meadow of my mind. Alone in a crowd. I sit quietly in the meadow, flying kites in my mind. Wind wafting gently lifting the kites to great heights. I let the burdens of the day follow their rise. Dancing in the wind, far above the worldly cares. Letting go of the strains of the day. I slowly reel the kite back in. Serenity is mine. The crowd watches in wonder as I pick up my kite and return to their world. Serenity is mine. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful serenity! I like this very much, Marge!  Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is exquisite! 'The meadow of my mind'...can I come too?  |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Wonder-full! Nothing better than imagination to calm down, relax. Cheaper, easier, and not at all toxic! Let's all do that, like when we're waiting for the bus or the lights or anytime we need it. Inspirational poem, Marge.(  -can't help but rhapsodise on this subject!!) |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Marge, next time someone tells me to go fly a kite, I think I will do it your way. Lovely. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How wonderful, to be able to find that place of peace in your heart. Beautiful! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is wonderfully expressed, Marge, and definitely the secret to inner serenity in this clock-spinning world. Regardless of how frantic the world may become, you are out standing in your field! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: Serenity definitely comes from within...love this.. HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge, This was delightful and so well written, I admire your abilities. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, my goodness ... this sure was a crowd-pleaser now wasn't it. The truth is ... I'm a great kite flyer. There truly is something that pulls the tension out as the kite soars. The fact that I enjoy it so much is what made this poem a reality. And when things don't go just right in my inside world ... I do retreat to the 'meadow of my mind.' Denise - Thank you, my friend. Severn - Come on over ... winds blowing. SeaAngel - It really works ... promise me you will remember and try it. OhMe - Warning ... it's addictive. Martie - Join me in that peace, my friend. Balladeer - I retreat to the meadow quite often. Serenity is mine. RainbowGirl - That's the secret. LostDreamer - Why, thank you. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
May I join you? Sounds like just the place I need right now |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes - Serenity - The Ultimate Peace..... Love it... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot - You'll love it. Join me, please ! Nan - Serenity is such a calming of the soul. The place of renewal ... if only for the moment. Visit often. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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