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Open Poetry #4

I Am Always With You

Dawne
Junior Member

since 1999-12-05

Posts 15
USA

0 posted 1999-12-05 10:50 PM

Here I stand at the door,
Forehead and hand pressed against the glass,
Waiting, hoping, wondering,
Will I ever see you on the other side.

Here I wait looking through the glass,
Hoping, wondering, will I ever see
Your love filled eyes looking back at me.

Here I am behind the glass,
My eyes infused with yours,
Wondering would you walk
Away if I was to open the door.

Here I hold open the door,
The glass separating us no more,
Hoping you will come inside,
And in my life forever reside.

Here I try to hide my tears,
Hoping, waiting, wondering,
Will you prove your love, take the chance,
And shatter the glass between us.

Dawne
Junior Member

since 1999-12-05

Posts 15
USA

1 posted 1999-12-05 10:58 PM

OOPS!! ha ha
Title should be
The Glass Between Us

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-05 10:59 PM

This is filled with such heartfelt longing! Very nice, Dawne!

Denise

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 1999-12-05 11:10 PM

Dawne - Welcome to Passions.
The title snafu is cute, considering
The Glass Between Us was 'shattered'
and now here stands, I Am Always With You.
Like it all very much.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dawne
Junior Member

since 1999-12-05

Posts 15
USA

4 posted 1999-12-05 11:22 PM

Yes Denise, it is
filled w/longing
thanks

Hey Marge, haha
I was embarrased when I
saw I put on the wrong title,
u made me feel better, thanks!

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

5 posted 1999-12-06 01:26 PM

Welcome Dawne...your poetry is beautiful and very comforting.

miriam coronado

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