Open Poetry #4 |
Thoughts Of You |
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I sense your breath Floating across my skin Your thoughts Blanketing me Like warming firelight Melting the ice That once formed Within my tragic heart.... I sink within the depths Of your softened eyes No poet's word describes The sheer emotion Flowing from within me For the first time I am whole Because of only you.... Tears wash over me The tender droplets so vivid Melting away with your kiss My dreams now reality As I feel your love Consuming me And I somehow know That forever is ours.... My love blossoms With the passing of time Every minute It becomes stronger Unbreakable Whenever I need you You are here As I shall be for you. *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alwye - So beautiful. I hope it's something you're living. It's just soooooo pretty. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, Krista this is soooooo beautiful! I love it! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I've got to agree Alwye.....this is simply beautiful!..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all very much! Marge- It is definitely something I'm living. Nothing's more inspirational to me than real life. *Krista Knutson* "I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~ |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
this is a beatiful poem, i remeber feeling this feeling for the first time in my life, it overtook my entire soul, thank you for bringing it back. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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You're very welcome, Amber. *Krista Knutson* "I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very Lovely and Romantic! Great Job! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Krista...this is absolutely beautiful. I love your use of imagery |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you both very much!!! *Krista Knutson* "I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very delicate piece Alwye. K [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Lovely piece, Alwye. Firelight is so potent, isn't it? |
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