Open Poetry #4 |
My Memories |
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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An anchor clock and a kitchen plaque < !signature-->A little lamp and a cute knickknack; That 'Irish Blessing' on my wall And that calendar...I love them all. That photograph and a homemade card They are treasured gems I won't discard Those little keepsakes from the past Hold memories that'll always last. Remembered smiles, ev'ry caring word Such a rhapsody before unheard All chords of perfect harmony All pieced together so tenderly... A symphony beyond compare My memories, a treasure rare. Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-05-1999).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, This poem is so warm and beautiful - and full of love I LOVE IT! Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise this is comfy as a teddy bear! Wonderful memories...may they stay just as warm in your thoughts years from now as they do this day. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You're sure great at those sonnets Denise. This is beautiful, really it is. K |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, Elizabeth, Rebecca and Severn for your kind comments! I'm glad you liked it. I wrote this shortly after my Dad passed away when I was reflecting on the few mementoes I had from him. They are more precious than gold to me. Thanks again. You people are so wonderful! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - Truly a treasure. Funny how the mementos are so precious to us and evoke such strong memories. The nostalgic ~keeper-of-everything~ in me likes this very, very much. And you're pretty gosh-darned wonderful yourself. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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I'm so glad that you liked this Marge. And thanks for saying that you think I'm wonderful. I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes over your kindness. Thanks again! You are so sweet! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh Denise.....I've got the warm and fuzzies....'S'.... A very charming piece..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, Pepper! woooohooooo...the officical Passions Reader!!!! Congratulations, girl! Your comments always mean so much to me! Denise |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Awesome work, Denise - I have a collection like that myself... |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Absolutely lovely, Denise. ...and even more so, finding out how you came to write this! Well done! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you Nan and Sally for your kind comments! I always appreciate hearing from you! Denise |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Memories are precious...after all, without our memories and experiences, who would we be? ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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