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Open Poetry #4

Hints of romance

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-12-05 09:18 PM

Don't close my eyes
with words untrue.
In all your lies
I still see you.
I know your not
What claimed to be.
I know you've thought,
'bout you and me.
Why don't you care
what’s wrong with chance
There’s something there
Hints of romance.
Don't run from this
Don’t hide your heart
For us you'd miss
before we start.

The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.

Dusk Treader

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

1 posted 1999-12-05 10:25 PM

Great poem Kevin! I enjoyed this, one. Thanks for Posting

"Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"

Dawne
Junior Member

since 1999-12-05

Posts 15
USA

2 posted 1999-12-05 11:32 PM

I really liked
this one Kevin.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-05 11:35 PM

Another great poem, Kevin! Sometimes in the romance department, you just have to take a chance!

Denise

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

4 posted 1999-12-05 11:42 PM

Thanks d, i totally agree
Dawn and dusk
thank you also
haha will you look at that dawn and dusk replied to my poem =)

Dawne
Junior Member

since 1999-12-05

Posts 15
USA

5 posted 1999-12-05 11:52 PM

wow, what do u know,
he not only is a poet,
he is a COMEDIAN!
LOL

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