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Beri
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since 1999-11-25
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0 posted 1999-12-05 08:42 PM


You are my knight in shining armor
My savior at all times
You can make me smile
At any givne time
You make me laugh with the simplest thing
You always know how to lift me up
Even when it seems impossible
You may be bad
You may be wrong for me
But I don't care
I love you all the more
I love you even when I shouldn't
When I know I am wrong, I don't care
I love you anyways...

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-12-05 08:53 PM


They say love is blind! Your poem sure says it's so!  

 Denise


Dusk Treader
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2 posted 1999-12-05 10:29 PM


Great poem Beri!  I've felt the same way myself on occasion, hehe.  Great work, thanks for posting!  

 "Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"


Beri
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3 posted 1999-12-06 08:56 PM


Yes, Love definitely is blind, or so I feel...that is exactly what i meant in this poem.  My knight in shining armor is also the worst person for me in a way ... as is for alot of people...
Thanks for the comments...  

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