Open Poetry #4 |
The Gentle Soul |
Denise
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He wonders often what it is That makes her want to stay What does she see that others can't For others turned away. No, it can't be wealth or status He's but a simple man And the dreams of youth have vanished Yes ev'ry single plan. He never thought that looks were his She tends to disagree And he could be more romantic But sure, he tries to be. And his hair once fine and golden Is turning thin and gray And the strength of youth is waning And more each passing day. Then he asks her one day plainly, "Just why do you still care?" She just looks at him and smiles, "I've found a treasure rare!" A gentle soul won't fade away It's as the purest gold For it won't decay or tarnish And never shall grow old. Denise |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Great, Denise - How true it is - We need only have the wisdom to recognize that inner beauty..... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Beauty is carried within. What a lovely poem. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Denise, this is one of my favorites from you! I bet it's sent as an "ECard" a lot! And rightfully so, it's lovely! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Few people have good enough eyesight to see it, Denise. Excellent, as always. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - What lovely sentiment you've expressed. So true for so many. How wonderfully in love with love they are. I've often thought those very thoughts when I've seen the older couples on the street holding hands and being so obviously ... still in love. I visit many nursing homes to share poetry with them and I can tell you that ~forever love~ does exist. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Thank you, Nan, Eloise, Pdv, Balladeer and Marge for reading and commenting! You are all so sweet! Denise |
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Dawne Junior Member
since 1999-12-05
Posts 15USA |
Denise, what can I say, I love it! |
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Denise
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Thank you, Dawne! I'm go glad for your reading and commenting! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful, just beautiful Denise.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Denise
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Thank you so much, Pepper! You are so sweet! Goodnight! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Denise - how inspirational. Well done! K |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise the beauty just pours forth from this. Excellent, excellent!!! Clapping... <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denise...this is absolutely wonderful |
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Denise
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Thank you, Kamla, Rebecca and Ruth for your reading and kind comments! You all are so wonderful! Denise |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I love rare treasures myself, and I've found a few. This is so sweet and beautiful. ~sky So you go and make it happen |
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