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A life without purpose
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A life without purpose |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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A life without purpose, I lived day to day. Then you came along, Words I could not convey. At that very moment My life was complete. My mind, it was racing, My heart could not beat. Nothing else mattered. You were the one, Crawling through life, To you I did run. But you saw it different Already content Nothing could happen, nothing I meant. And so life goes on. I live day to day. My life incomplete, My love gone astray. The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Touching poem, Kevin. Sometimes love hurts. You have expressed that so beautifully! Denise |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Time and potential..alas, it's something a lot of us wish for more of.. Your day will come...hang in there! |
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MADDavid Junior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 26Carrollton, TX, USA |
There is a forum that may have your answer, if you dare to read in the Spiritual Forum. I challenge you to go there. There you will find a lot of caring people that can show you where to get the answers to your questions and since you have a lot of time on your hands, go for it. I say this out of love and honestly believe what I am telling you. Shine a light and darkness disappears. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin - What a cutie pie you are. I couldn't help but see. You are just a doll ... wish I was as young as thee. Thanks for the picture to put with your rhyme. You'll have no trouble keeping the girl next time. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Kevin: Next time you feel the blues write a funny poem and know how many people you'll make laugh and in turn, you'll laugh too...well, I hope you will..  HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thank you all, I have thought about writing to cheer me up but ive decided, these feelings are too strong to let go unrecorded, someday ill look back on them and smile i hope |
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Dawne Junior Member
since 1999-12-05
Posts 15USA |
Well Kevin, I agree these feelings should be let out, makes for some great poems, I loved it! |
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