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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 1999-12-04 02:58 AM

Why Can't He See Me?

I whispered thoughts in his direction
Did the wind forget to carry them
Didn't he notice my complexion
Flushed with loving thoughts of him

Does he even know I'm here
Watching him from right behind
Is his heart so cold that he
Would just pretend that he is blind

Does he really know I love him
Should I tell him face to face
No, I think I ought to whisper
Perhaps another time and place

Why doesn't he look at me
Would he turn away out of fear
So close that I could touch his hand
Why can't he see me standing here

If he could only know how much
I long to feel his loving touch
Perhaps he'd turn to look at me
Perhaps he'd kiss me tenderly

Elizabeth Santos

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-12-04 05:49 AM

Oh, this has to be one of my favorites from you! I have been in this situation! Thank you for such a lovely, soulful poem!

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

2 posted 1999-12-04 07:21 AM

Elizabeth I so enjoy your work

This is really lovely!

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It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 1999-12-04 08:29 AM

Elizabeth, my friend -
But another lovely stroke
from your poetic pen
that sets my heart remembering.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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broker6
Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 132
Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

4 posted 1999-12-04 11:50 AM

By George, Elizabeth, if he won't kiss you, I will!!! :-)

Just kiddin'. Nicely put.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-12-04 12:27 PM

Elizabeth,
He dwells a different dimension
But where it is I cannot mention.
I'm sure he tries in his own way.
But commitments, well what can I say? *L*

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 1999-12-04 01:03 PM

Quite wonderful, as always Elizabeth. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-12-04 01:09 PM

Another fine one Elisabeth...your talents are boundless

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

8 posted 1999-12-04 02:40 PM

Very touching Liz, I loved it, thanks for sharing. I think someone needs the number of a good eye doctor.

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