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Open Poetry #4

100% pure ADRENALINE

FALLEN ANGEL
Junior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 19
BROWNSVILLE, TX, USA

0 posted 1999-12-04 02:07 AM

100% PURE ADRENALINE

I LOVE THE FEELING,
THAT I GET,
WHEN I'M WITH YOU.
IT'S LIKE CRUISING ALONG
A LITTLE STRETCH OF BACK ROAD.
ALL OF A SUDDEN YOU DROP THAT GEAR,
FROM 4TH TO 3RD,
MASH THE GAS,
POP THE CLUTCH,
AND BAM!
YOU GET THROWN BACK IN YOUR SEAT,
NOW YOUR JUST ALONG FOR THE RIDE.
FROM 55 TO 85 LIKE NOTHING,
AND JUST AS THE RPM's HIT 5000,
YOU PUT IT IN TOP GEAR,
NO HOLD'S BARD.
AS THE SPEEDOMETER RISES,
YOU FEEL YOUR HEART RACE,
THE EXHILARATION,
THE TWISTING SNAKE LIKE TURNS SUCK YOU IN,
CLOSER AND CLOSER.
THE ADRENALINE STARTS TO FLOW THROUGH YOUR VEINS,
AND ALL YOU CAN DO IS HIT THE GAS HARDER.
YOUR EYES FLIP BACK AND FORTH,
SCANNING THE ROAD.
AND WITH YOU THERE ARE NO BRAKES,
ONLY ONE CHOICE IS LEFT,
FASTER AND FASTER WE MUST GO,
UHH OHH, ROAD BLOCK AHEAD,
WILL THAT STOP US?
HELL NO!!
JUST GIVE HER ALL YOU'VE GOT,
AND NEVER LET GO.
SO THAT'S WHAT IT'S LIKE,
TO SPEND A SECOND WITH YOU,
WHETHER IT'S KISSING, HUGGING,
ARGUING, OR LAUGHING.
AND NO ONE ELSE WILL EVER DUPLICATE,
THAT FEELING THAT YOU DO,
100% PURE ADRENALINE!

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

1 posted 1999-12-04 02:09 AM

I really like this piece! I know that feeling all too well and I wouldn't trade it for any other in the world.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-12-04 05:47 AM

Though this is not my cup of adrenaline, you certainly do portray your thrill here. May I suggest you ditch the capital letters though, makes reading your poem difficult. Thanks.

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