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One Heart, One Mind |
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Poetess099 Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 15Alabama |
His heart is one of the best things about him. The way he is able to love unconditionally. The way that he touches me with his words, and his most humble thoughts. He is such a beautiful person. Sometimes around him, words fail me. His mind amazes me. I could honestly spend all day just watching him think. He captivates me with his inducive mind. He seduces me with his whim and almost sagacious psyche. He is truly the most fascinating individual I've ever had the liberty of knowing. His mere presence absolutely draws me in. I want to know everything about him. I want him to know everything about me. I just want him. ------------------ Melissa ~~I can resist anything but temptation~~ Oscar Wilde |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I know what you mean and you say it beautifully! Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Melissa. Welcome to Passions! Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Beautiful, Melissa!  It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Poetess099 - Nicely put. Honesty in every line. I like it. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome Poetess, nice to have you here. This is great - I like Marge's comment about honesty - it suits this poem well. |
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