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Open Poetry #4

Optical Illusions

Rachel_A
Member

since 1999-11-30

Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA

0 posted 1999-12-02 11:49 PM

I feel so hot, I'm burning up
I feel so lonely and so cold.
I wipe the sweat from my brow
As I shiver from one of my many chills
I feel so lonely, so why am I always telling people, leave me alone?
The pen I am using to write
With is a black optical illusion
It comforts me greatly, watching it.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 1999-12-03 07:13 AM

Rachel_A -
I found some substance in this one.
The optical illusion of the pen moving of it's own accord ... recording the thoughts
in your mind ........ intriguing.
Welcome to Passions.

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