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Dying To Try It .. Or .. Trying To Diet
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Dying To Try It .. Or .. Trying To Diet |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dying To Try It .. Or .. Trying To Diet ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Scrumptious mounds of chocolate calling out to me. Lots and lots of chocolate I'm dying to try it, you see. Cakes, pies and goodies all appeal to me. I can't resist the stuff ! I'd can eat my weight in chocolate eclairs, I cannot get enough ! The Keebler Elf knows me by my first name. The Cookie Monster is always tempting my wit. My answer is always the same. I'm dying to try it ! Well, as fate would have it, the calories weren't withdrawn. All the sweets that were my delight are now upon my buns. I'll try to think thin. I'll try to get it right. Instead of dying to try it ... I'll be trying to diet ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Cute poem, I enjoyed the read for I too am a cookie monster. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge, this was wonderful it sang my hearts desire and like you that 4 letter word is facing me in the mirror everyday else I decide to become a beached porpoise. Thanks for the smile. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cute, Marge! Can you mail all those goodies to me?! I gave up on dieting!  ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I was laughing before I even got to the poem my dear  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chocolate, give me chocolate, you have let loose the monster. Enjoyed the poem Marge, as always. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Perfect. Daughter has a t-shirt that says "Give me all your chocolate and nobody gets hurt" Chocoholics here! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFLMAO!!!! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great poem, Marge. As my grandma used to say, "A waist is a terrible thing to mind." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Only you, Marge, only you Your imagination has no end This is so "sweet" Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - Who'da thunk it? LostDreamer - Well, I 'fudged' a little on this one. I'm one of those people you just 'love to hate'. The 'icing on the cake' is I eat and eat and eat and never gain the weight. Denise - Well, I'll share. Hoot - I'm laughing too. Martie - Lots and lots of it. I like chocolate, dipped in chocolate. OhMe - I'm also a member of Chocolates Not So Anonymous. Nan - Let me guess ... Really Outstanding Triple Fudge Laden Marshmallow Addict's Only ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer - LOL ! 'Bout time you showed up for the chocolate feast. Elizabeth, my friend - 'SWEET' ? 'SWEET' ? Did somebody say 'SWEET' ? Open the box of See's Candies ! Yummy ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge! I'm here, to say the least, Let's begin the chocolate feast! ALmond joys, Three Musketeers, Snickers coming out our ears! Hot fudge sundae - what a hit! Chocolate on banana split! Cover raisins....peanuts, too Chocolate chips for me and you. Chocolate ice cream! I declare! Don't forget those great eclairs. Hershey's chocolate....squeeze it out Suck it from the bottle spout. Lovers also have a way To use chocolate in their love-play Chocolate adds a great sensation When one uses imagination! I love chocolate...that's my message Even on my vienna sausage! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer - Chocolate on raisins and little marshmallows, makes for one very happy fellow. I like all the chocolate sensations you mention ... they make a fine delight. But, tell me please, Balladeer where I can get chocolate covered vienna sausage? I just can't get them here ! Between you and I ... one of us is nuts ! And I think it may be me ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
hehohe - I do anything for chocolate - ANYTHING! I'll have to tell you my notorious chocolate-mints-that-weren't-mine-in-someone-else's-fridge story sometime!! Love this, and like Hoot it was the title that had me laughing first. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Severn - You cannot leave me hanging waiting for the story ... e-mail it to me today ! I'd like a smile on my face too. Thank you for smiling ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Started smiling at the title... now between the poem and the responses, I'm indulging in some very unprofessional giggles! LOL. Great job! |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
AAAHHH! Chocolate!!! My weakenss, especially dark chocolate. Thank you Marge!! Now I'm going to be thinking about getting some all morning! Great poem. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, Chocolate mints reminds me of My son,s quick whit last Christmas eve My sister-in-law served chocolate mints In clever wrappers well conceived Religiously placed in sacred tin Each wrapper from the Bible did hint Of a simple verse of noted worth And so they are called "Test-a-Mints" Then son pipes up, if they're outdated We'll assume them to be "Old Test-a-mints!" Just thought I'd throw that in Anyway, Marge, YOU ARE A RIOT! With tales of diet Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern - The only way your giggles would be unprofessional is if we don't pay you for them ... here's a box of chocolates! Thanks! LostBoy - Oh, dark chocolate hugging almonds ... what a treat ! Now I've even got ME going ! Elizabeth, my friend - Loved the story set to rhyme ... what a gift you hold. In a tin of chocolate covered rhymes ... yours is so refreshing. Yummy ! A treat. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh, my gosh, Marge! We're on the same wavelength here!! ------------------ Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Other Elizabeth - Thanks ... if you're 'going' to the store ... PICK ME UP SOME CHOCOLATE ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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