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Ohme
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0 posted 1999-12-02 05:17 PM


Maybe

I don't believe in never
because I believe in sometime.
And I've learned not to trust forever.
It likes to play tricks on your mind.
I don't believe in always.
It can't be a smart thing to do.
But I could believe in maybe
if I could believe in you.

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Lorene

Yesterday is history,
tomorrow just a mystery.
And if today is good to me,
it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!


© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 1999-12-02 05:26 PM


And Hope springs eternal. Good job.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-02 08:08 PM


Very good, Ohme! You have said so much in so few lines!

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Denise


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-12-02 08:11 PM


OhMe -
Great ! Just Great !
I believe in if - maybe - and always.


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 1999-12-02 08:23 PM


Ohme,
Enjoyed, well done.

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-12-02 08:55 PM


Oh, nice lines "But I could believe in maybe
if I could believe in you."
I like

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2008-04-26 08:55 AM



In loving memory this day of Ina Lorene Meadows~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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