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Open Poetry #4

Maday in a Pill

armanca
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 211
Tennessee

0 posted 1999-12-02 01:40 PM

Swirling nonsense in my brain
becaomes a foggy notion of a better day
Rain comes...
and the better day becomes a headache
eased by a little pill

brandondinsmore
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

1 posted 1999-12-02 04:05 PM

Short, sweet, great title. I like this one. Can you delve into detail of the subject?

armanca
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 211
Tennessee

2 posted 1999-12-02 05:27 PM

I feel like I have been told so much and haven't listened to what was said. About life, love, and relationships. So, my life becomes this outward object that i'm trying to decipher...but in the end. I can't grasp any meanings...and i end up with a headache.

jennyanydots
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 15

3 posted 1999-12-02 05:31 PM

I agree with brandon. Great Title!!! Very introspective.

armanca
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 211
Tennessee

4 posted 1999-12-02 10:16 PM

Thank you Jenny!! Neat name...where'd you come up with it?

Carman

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