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Open Poetry #4
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armanca
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since 1999-07-07
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Tennessee
0 posted 1999-12-02 12:57 PM

Like licorice rain
... a mind game
Torrid thoughts abused
... candyland approves
Melt in your hand...
but i'm in your head
And holding me down
only causes your sanity to sink
... in my sweet syrup.


Carman
© Copyright 1999 Carman - All Rights Reserved
jennyanydots
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since 1999-07-09
Posts 15
1 posted 1999-12-02 05:42 PM

WOW!!! This one is a bit challenging (scary)
armanca
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since 1999-07-07
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Tennessee
2 posted 1999-12-02 10:21 PM

Yes...It is scary. The subject matter that is. It's about an abuser
jennyanydots
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since 1999-07-09
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3 posted 1999-12-03 09:45 PM

I didn't see it as being from a victim..or did you mean it was written from an abuser?
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-12-04 05:27 AM

I didn't see the abuser part of this either. It's an interesting poem though.

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