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Sven
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0 posted 1999-12-02 10:51 AM


I really hate days like this. . .
Days without you. . .
Days spent dreaming of your kiss. . .
Days of feeling blue. . .
being with you my only wish

You're so close and yet so far. . .
On days like this. . .
Do we see the same morning star. . .
Do we have the same wish. . .
being with you where you are

We each go through our day. . .
On days like this. . .
But the one thing that I want to say. . .
Being with you would be bliss. . .
if with your heart mine could stay.

The thing I hate most about days like this. .
Days without you. . .
Is that days like this, dreaming of your kiss

change into night. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 1999-12-02 03:00 PM


Oh Yeah, I can really relate - and I loved the last part about days turning to nights....that's even worse sometimes! This was very moving, and a very beautiful heartfelt poem! Glad I caught it to kick it back to the top for others to enjoy & relate to!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


Sven
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2 posted 1999-12-02 05:25 PM


Thank you so much. . .

I'm glad that you liked it. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Ohme
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3 posted 1999-12-02 05:50 PM


Yeah, they do turn into night. Lovely.
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