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| Open Poetry #4 |
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Farewell to night (Sonnet from workshop) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I'm flying on illusion's mighty wings, Far higher than the eagle ever flies, Above intrusion by all earthly things, Aloft on dreams until the darkness dies. My castle built on clouds that number nine, Enlightenment through touch of Angel’s wing, A tarriance with Spirits so divine That fills my soul with love, and makes it sing. Ethereal awareness fills my heart, With eyes afire, I gaze upon the Moon, To Mother Earth and heaven’s starry yard; And hope my dreamer's path won’t end too soon. With dewdrop tears, I greet the dawn's first light -- Embracing day, I bid farewell to night. [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Great imagery Munda, -heaven's starry yard- is excellent! Nice work all around. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Great imagery indeed Munda, Loved it. Well Done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Munda, your phrases and word usage is superb. "clouds that number nine"....that's wonderful. This is very excellent work. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Munda's good for another lap around... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Munda, this is so soooooooo excellent! ------------------ Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed your sonnet Munda... |
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Mystic Essence Junior Member
since 1999-09-29
Posts 28 |
This is lovely, so beautiful.... ------------------ My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
by the way... Uitstekend!!! (how was my dutch?) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thank you all so much for reading and replying. : ) Balladeer: The poem may be mine, but it's Kess who's made it "superb" : ) Mike: I must say...your Dutch is uitstekend ! : ) LOL ! |
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