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Sunrise Soliliquy (a departure from Musketeer stuff)
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Sunrise Soliliquy (a departure from Musketeer stuff) |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA 
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I opened my eyes to greet the light, The sun quickly making day from night. The burning globe rose pink in the sky It's brilliant rays rising on high, And in the iridescent glow Shed dim light on all below. A beautiful sight to my bleary eyes This wonderful morning's bright sunrise. I was reminded of birth anew And reminded again of loving you. I wish you could see it through your slumber And appreciate it for its wonder. But for now, just go on sleeping, In your quiet own way dreaming And wake up later with our son, Start a new day of work and fun. I love you more than you could know More than all above or below As I love our son, our beautiful boy Whos brightness rivals this morning joy. And the sun has risen, the day is born What a glorious, beautiful morn. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
What a lovely poem. May all your mornings be just as beautiful! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow, I wish I could say it's that beautiful waking up in MY house! Sounds like I need to move in with you guys!!! LMAO  You have taken a moment that is too often taken for granted, and shined and polished it, until it sparkles with your emotion and gratitude! Thank you - and am so glad you relish every day with those around you! I pray soon, I can do the same, and see the sunrise as you do! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Ohme...they are! PFF...You're welcome anytime but hopefully will not feel the need soon enough. Best wishes to you both on a speedy resolution to this extended wait. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Robert. Lovely sentiments. ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How Lovely  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very touching and very loving. K |
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