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Pot-O-Gold |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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If wishing it could bring you back to me Beside me here then you would surely stand My heart would sing in three part harmony If once again you graced my lonely land. If wishing were the balm to heal this pain At last my heart so light would sing a song Of joy replacing sorrow's sad refrain And dance a happy jig my whole life long. But wishes can't do anything at all And dreams, I know, can't change a single thing Reality has cruely come to call And missing you's the only song I sing. At rainbow's end we'll meet again, I'm sure That pot-O-gold that I am longing for. For Mom and Dad, in memory. ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Here it is.... Great poem!!!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, Simply beautiful! A tear fell with the last lines. How we miss our parents when they're gone! I love this poem Liz - tired of typing out my name |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Oh Denise.....you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sometimes that ache inside cuts sharper than a sword my friend. Beautiful words and feeling for you. Love K. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
And that will be a wonderful meeting. Just think of all the things you will have to tell them. Mother has been gone 8 years and there are still times when I momentarily think I'd like to tell Mother. Then reality sets in and I know it will have to wait.  Beautiful poem, Denise. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Beautiful Denise. I really liked this a lot. ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, A sad and beautiful poem. *L* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful tribute Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful Denise! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
God bless you, Denise. Hugs Your friend, Elizabeth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks all for your warm, kind comments. Thanks, Nan for the pot-O-gold too! You have all lifted my spirits a bit! Goodnight everybody! (I'm really tired) ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hugs Denise! Wonderful poem! May your wish come true. You will find your pot of gold someday! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just inside Heaven's gates, right at the rainbow's end ... there are streets paved with gold, lined with our loved ones waiting for us to enter in. There will be great celebration when loved ones call our name. We turn, we look ... and God says, Welcome, we were waiting for you. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just inside Heaven's gates, right at the rainbow's end ... there are streets paved with gold, lined with our loved ones waiting for us to enter in. There will be great celebration when loved ones call our name. We turn, we look ... and God says, Welcome, we were waiting for you. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks Rebecca and Marge for reading and commenting! And thanks for the beautiful poem, Marge. ------------------ Denise |
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