Entrance stage right (repost teen 2)

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Open Poetry #4

Entrance stage right (repost teen 2)

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-12-01 08:42 PM

For anyone who has ever seen love sweep in and out of their life too quickly

Entrance
stage right
Smiles
Bright light
quick glance
soft touch
Love sweet
too much
subtle
lonely
Love you
only
watch close
say less
feeble
at best
much hope
tonight
exit
stage right

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-12-01 08:59 PM

Ahh yes...it is familiar to me. Great job with this one Kevin!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-01 09:05 PM

I think we've all performed on this stage! Very good, Kevin!

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Denise

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

3 posted 1999-12-01 09:11 PM

I think I saw that play as well.

nicely done, Kevin.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-12-01 10:55 PM

Hey, I even went for a repeat preformance

Well written Kevin

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

5 posted 1999-12-01 11:10 PM

lol im starting to think you guys are replying to see who can out metaphor the next!

everyone is so cool though i love the fit

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