»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #4
»
Impotent Boys
| Open Poetry #4 |
|
Impotent Boys |
|
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
|
Impotent Boys Nonresistant to women weaving dreams into webs with words from smooth tongues slapping on soft palates enticing lures to little fishes swimming in this pond-ering of thoughts with meanings obscured through murky waters. Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
||
| © Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Most interesting. I like it. |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Paints a scarlet picture of women, it does...  |
||
|
Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Don't quite know what I want to say about this, except that it struck me, and I like it! Great job. :-) |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I wrote this poem today at lunch in response to a poem posted in another forum by a woman. I was enthralled by the poem... captivated by it. All night I dreamt of it....I felt wrapped in its words somehow. No disrespect to any woman here Nan. More like a tribute I think. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
here fishy fishy fishy.... (Say didn't you say that once, yes you did, I remember!) Very good poem, Robert! One of your best! ------------------ Denise |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Ok Denise....$10.00 this week!!! Thank you very much. RB PS: I did say here fishy fishy to Munda. By the way....where is Munda??? ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I really liked this Robert, kind of allusive, but captivating. I tried to capture the meaning but it slithered from my grasp into the murky waters. |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
like a slippery fish??? Eh Martie?? |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Huh? What Robert? Red is one of my favorite colors - I look pretty good in it myself...LOL... |
||
|
Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Very well done Robert. Loved this one. |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Oh.....I had a flashback of the Scarlet letter ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
||
|
Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Iliked this one a lot Robert. ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RobertB, Good one. |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Robert, I like it! Liz |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Most interesting |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks to all of you!! This is one of my 5 minute poems that I wonder where in the heck it came from!! Just eating lunch yesterday and there it was. Robert |
||
|
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I thought this was gonna be yet another poem about Balladeer?....Though it wasn't, it was still quite good... |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
hmmmm should I write one about him???? :-} |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||