Open Poetry #4 |
The Letter- Repost for Veterans Day |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
The doctor said, shan't make it through the night, Frail old woman, asleep in fading light, I tiptoed in and stood beside her bed, And as she woke, I heard her as she said, Did you read the letter, Johnny sent to me? It's right there on the table, take a look and see, Johnny is my only child, he's gone away to war, Last night I got a letter, and now I'm sad no more, Johnny says he loves me, a hero he's become, He says the war is over, and soon to home he'll come, Will you be so kind sir, and read as nurse has done, For my eyesight fails me, the letter from my son, As I reached for letter, I see her fade away, At peace with her creator, I slowly go my way, In hand I held her letter, from president it read, We regretfully inform you ma'am, that John, your son is dead. To the veterans in Passions, thank you for your service. |
||
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved | |||
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Mike, this one brought a tear to my eyes. It is a well told story and oh so sad ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem, Mike... And may I add my thanks to the veterans... your service and sacrifices are appreciated! |
||
RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
As a veteran, I would like to say thank you. There was a time and a war no so long ago where we were not so popular. It is good to see that those who served selflessly in all wars are now honored the same. May fear of losing peace keep us forever vigilant. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
||
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for reposting this. It's so sad, yet so real!!! |
||
Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Thanks Mike. Great poem and tribute. Very well done. |
||
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great poem Mike. Gave me goose-pimples. |
||
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I could read this one a dozen times - Let's bring it around again, shall we? |
||
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, I'm crying again. This is so wonderful. What a fitting tribute for Veterans Day. ------------------ Denise |
||
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nicely done again, Mike. Appreciate the appreciation. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |