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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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DIVINITY Energies crest Across the skies, Ever to rest Upon your eyes. That shining light Releasing spark, Forever bright, Assailing Dark. The fate in hand, Souls torn afore. We dare demand Tempt Fate once more. The aura rings, Angelic blue. As heaven sings Of one from two. Lovers, star crossed, Meet Destiny. From chaos, lost, Divinity. From deep blue tears Of ocean sky. From endless years Wondering, "why". Passions collide, Burst bright and bold. The welkin pride, A vault of gold... Bears witness through - Two stars, now one, Shining anew, Bright as the sun. For My Femme. I read your "Cosmic Collision ", it hit very deeply. Thank you, babe, for the light you have shone into my life. I hope my reply reveals all intended to you. ------------------ Michael Anderson Loneliness isn't in being alone, Loneliness is alone in being. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Well now, this rhyme again is one that stopped me cold. Read it again to absorb each nuance I did. 'Tis a wondrous tribute to an equally wondrous feeling my friend. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Superb use of words, Michael!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
From poet's pen to angelic blue Seem's like divinity is you Elizabeth |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Good one, Michael. The mystery of love that makes us all feel so small in its entirity. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Beatiful words from one to another Michael. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, This poem struck me in the heart, And spread to every little part. Exquisite. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You've done it again! Great one! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
**biggest sigh!** Well now, it's nice to be back in the groove of writing in reply to eachother's work....which is how my heart found you in the first place! Makes me smile huge! And what a beautiful comeback...Thank you. I don't know what it was that made me see us as cosmic all of a sudden, but wow, am I glad I did...it puts a whole different *spark* on things!  I just work everyday to try and keep your spirits up, and your faith enduring - I always want to see smiles on your face. I wait impatiently for the day we meet in Dallas for our trip. Again, thank you for this poem - it matches beautifully against mine....------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well Done Michael, loved this too. And PFF yes this poem does match beautifully against yours  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very nice, Michael. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Beautiful. Sigh... Memories chase each other cool as breezes but to know that such a thing can actually be genuine gives hope in a sometimes berefted heart such as what I carry... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply divine! Beautiful, Michael! ------------------ Denise |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Thank you ALL for such warm replies...but Femme truly deserves all credit for this one. Michael |
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