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When I was young
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When I was young |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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When I was Young When I was young, my dreams glimmered. Now the flame is set to simmer. When I was young, my blood would boil. Now the arteries just recoil. When I was young, there was no change. And now this thought to me is strange. How in hell did I live so long? Well maybe they spelled my name wrong? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cute  ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denice, Thanks for the cute. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice one Seymore and I like the bit of a different format for you Ruth ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Another smile you've given me this morning Sy....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I don't think your as old as you think you are--your quick wit and the poetry in you says you're young at heart and wise. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Liked... well done. sometimes I wish I could just remember my name.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
so you think they've spelled YOUR name wrong? Methinks its been polished and put on a shelf, for all the world to see. You should see what they do to MY name...LOL. Thanks as always for the smiling wit... ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Good one Seymour, hope they keep misspelling it (and mine too!) fh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ruth, Thank you, I always look for your response. Thank you. Pepper, You know what they say, a laugh a day, or is it an apple? Martie, To you I can only say thank you. Mike, Maybe they won't remember yours, Thanks Fred, You are one of my favorites and your comment means alot, thanks. |
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