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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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If I knew what tomorrow would bring how would I change today? And if yesterday were to come around again would today be the same? Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Indeed! Thought provoking words Robert. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Robert, If you could see from here to tomorrow and know what tomorrow would bring you'd want to attain or avoid it. For today that could change anything. If the past should repay you a visit I know you could lose your today. But today is the hope for tomorrow. One should never let that slip away without trying to grab it back even though it changes today. Ohme [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ya know, you are so genuine! You can take such few words and really provoke someone to think! Excellent! ------------------ <*\\\>< |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Robert I would not change the yesterdays Nor would tommorow I would see And one thing much more sure by far I would not change your poetry Elizabeth |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks you guys!!! ohme.....what did you say???? hehehehehe Robert Mongo just pawn in game of life. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Gee Robert, I thought my poetry was easier to understand than that. Guess not.  Translation; You can't change yesterday so don't live there. If you want to change tomorrow it has to be done today. Is that better? |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
thanks for the translation!!! :-} |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tomorrow's not yet begun There's only today |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Today is tomorrow's yesterday. is that an old one??? I mean...did I say that first???? Oh dear it is scary trying to be original!! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yeah, I think you did say that first, Robert! Seems to jog my memory a bit! Very good poem for ohme! Great replys everybody! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I would borrow from tomorrow if I thought today would stay. It can't, I shan't. Nice thoughts here. ~Marge~ ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
and to think i struggled with back to the future, WHAT IS GOING ON LOL o well enjoyed regardless |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Kevin! BACK TO THE FUTURE! That's what it reminded me of! Oh so confusing! ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Robert, You could also say that today is yesterdays tomorrow. But you can't say it first! I just did. LOL Kevin, it also looks like go forward to the past. Denise, Thanks. ------------------ Lorene |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
wow.....this has been soooo cool!! we gotta do this again! Robert |
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