Open Poetry #4 |
With Your... I Am... |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I wrote this for my husband for our 18th Anniversary. With Your... I Am... Design my destiny with your...detailed mind with you I am...whole Cast away my shadows with your...unending courage with you I am...Strong Soothe my aches and pains with your...gentle touch with you I am...eased Reach out to catch me with your...cradled arms with you I am...secure Mesmerize my senses with your...sunshine smile with you I am...happy Gaze into my eyes with your...gracious glance with you I am...radiant Speak the words I love you with your...delicate voice with you I am...loved Massage my longing back with your...determined fingertips with you I am...delighted Create for me a pillow with your...relaxed body with you I am...cushioned Protect me from the nightmares with your...cuddled embrace with you I am...safe Wake me in the morning with your...kiss so soft with you I am...blessed Accompany me always with your...caring thoughts with you I am...thoughtful Light my walkway with your...peaceful love with you I am...glorified |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
I am in awe. This is absolutely breathtaking. Almost made me teary eyed just to read it... What a beautiful tribute of your Love for each other! Wonderful Job ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dreamer, to feel this way after 18 years is truly wonderful. I think this marriage has a chance! Beautiful job. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Very lovely poem Dreamer. Sure sounds like you both have a good thing going on. May your next 18 yrs be just as great! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Gloria, this is absoutley beautiful! You are truly blessed to have a love so dear after so many years! (ps- did i miss your anniversary?) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is beautiful, Gloria! Congratulations to the happy couple! ------------------ Denise |
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