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Miss You Again, NO NEVER !
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Miss You Again, NO NEVER ! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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This poem was written to the opposite of another poem I wrote called "I miss You". My tenderness,My love Sent to me from above You WERE my Special One Always shining like the sun Bringing out my emotions I DIED within your Oceans I DID miss you everyday How much, I DON'T wish to say No longer I touch your heart And tenderness WILL part NO more Joy you bring to my day So please, Please just STAY away I'll hold you in a CHILLING embrace And I NEVER want to see your face Your lips I DON'T wish to devour And miss you NOT each second and hour Miss you again, NO never! From this day on and forever Where you are I DON'T want to be And from you, I set myself FREE ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You go girl!!! Feel better for saying it or is it fictional>?????? Anyway, great job  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Bitter verse often tastes best. This likes me soul-sib. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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jenmarie Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 27 |
what a powerful poem - sometimes i wish i could set myself free like that - |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Isis, Thank you!! no its not fictional and yes I do feel better Thank you. ------------ Soul-Brother, thanks so much. ------------ Jenmarie, Thank you. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-11-1999).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Liked this much Dark Angel, very powerful. Glad you got that out, didn't ya. ; ) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, Angel, don't beat around the bush. Say it like it is!!! hehe Nicely done. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
D.A. I guess it didn't go so well! Sorry to hear that!  Better things lie ahead for you Angel girl! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Munda, thanks so much and yes I was glad --------------- Balladeer, thank you. --------------- WhtDove, thanks so much Angel. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done Dark....you go girl!! I like the message behind this one ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ruth, Thank you so much Hon. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Wow - that is a really powerful piece DA. It speaks volumes from only a few verses. Well done - this sums up your writing " de vertute en devertutem" Huggs....... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, Thanks HoneyBee. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You said so powerfully....it rocks Stated perfectly....I love it! Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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