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Torn and Mended |
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cates Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 15 |
Torn apart My heart from insise Feeling of loss Empty Never before This feeling unknown How can i live So alone My heart to survive Beating With no Love to flow How shall I give This grand feeling of all With my Heart ripped out So hard to show Mend me together Emotions of fear I now stand with you Not so alone For my Heart is together With freedom This love for you __________________________________ For I am no poet May I learn from you all These feelings I have Show me the way To tear down this wall |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Cates, you're getting of to a good start. Sharing your feelings with others is what we are doing as well. Thanks for this poem. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me, it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cates - Walls are torn down in the same way they were built ... one obstacle at a time. You're off to a good start, my friend. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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cates Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 15 |
Thank you for the support, and also sharing your feelings with me too.  |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
You are a poet Just didn't know it (ouch, I know, old joke, sorry!) Seriously, thanks for sharing this. I really liked it and look forward to seeing more! |
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