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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In green of greenest greenery did stage a fiendish scene where blended with the scenery and hid from eyes quite keen most fine in finest finery of natures' emerald cloak did ponder certain ponderings and having pondered, spoke Of ballads and one Balladeer, a balladeering sort who sported such a sporting beard most oft' got used for sport by poets most poetically inclined to write such poems who focused on this focal point and not his gleaming dome Which gleamed with an unearthly light, they say it gleams there still 'neath ball-cap worn as ball-caps are, with gleam reducing bill that having much reduced said gleam is worn as I've deduced concealing what one might conceal from one concealed moose and thence to say in closing where one is supposed to close it's rumored that such rumors often hit it on the nose. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
LOL .. awesome job!  Sheli It's psychosomatic. You need a lobotomy. I'll get a saw |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
 I stand in awe of the Moose  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sheli, Thank you much. Doc Pete, High praise indeed, coming from you, many thanks. Doc |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
With worthy thought I read unworthy words about my worth, Poetic prattle from a poet renegade since birth. There's no dome in my domicile that shines when touched by light Nor beard defacing facial features God designed so right. I understand how understudies underestimate And lessen teacher's lessons they can not themselves create. The narrow-minded I don't mind. I'm mindful of their needs To feel their feelings must be felt by everyone who reads. I'll count jokes of my countenance like this encounter here As jealousy and zealous tries to imitate the 'deer. Pete said it well. You are the MAN, moose. fantasic work, as always. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Balladeer, Touche'. And I sir, credit you for crediting me with the accreditation of creating an accredited work of nonsense in such a nonsensical manner as to not offend your senses nor your sense of fair play. Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-10-2008 08:07 AM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's always an honor to be the object of your inflictions |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
loving it all the way  |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
stray cat you took me in with love and affection, knowing you don't like the reflection. me being a cat, not a dog; as i creep... my shadow moves across your wall. at time to time i,m a lazy sack, laying helplessly on your mat. i scratch the furniture, mark your walls, leaving my fur on the floors. even thought i do the most weirdest thing, you took care of me, which made my heart sing. so thanks for taking care of me after all... knowing i'm one crazy cat, with tricks in my paws. hope you like it. i wrote this poem since my sister always said i,m more like a cat than a human. mostly i love cats, she doesn't. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Ken, By all means,feel free to post on any of my threads, however, you may want to consider open poetry where you are apt to get more feedback. I'm a bit of a recluse, by choice, which means you are limiting yourself to very few replies. Just a thought. Doc |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Close to purrrfection, Ken, and listen to the Moose. Posting it in Open will get it some sood exposure and, hopefully, comments and feedback. Good luck! |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
thank you oh wise moose and sensei balladeer( means teacher in japanese if you didn't know) i will do just that |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and thank you, tamadachi. |
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