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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2008-06-05 09:09 AM


A masterpiece to mezmerize mayhaps my mind might form,
pre-eminent perfection penned par-excellent of norm.
Dactyllically delectable, decisive and damn fine,
but, having writ such wondrous work dare I declare "Its mine"?

Its likely that its lineage would be looked on askance,
to curry critics' council cuts a rug I seldom dance.
One need no nomenclature not in tune with ones' beliefs,
but, back to basics brethren it's oft' best to keep it brief.

Presenting one a paradox as poignant as percieved,
were I to write such wondrous works, might they not be believed?

© Copyright 2008 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-06-05 10:07 AM


Just had to pop in for a refill, Doc.

Nobody does it better.

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2008-06-05 10:31 AM


  

I love the alliterations. They just make me smile.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2008-06-05 12:32 PM


Karen,
Always a pleasant surprise to hear from you, thanks.
Doc

Susan,
A smile's worth a thousand words, wait, no that's a picture., O.K. so make it two thousand. Thanks.
Doc

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4 posted 2008-06-05 06:48 PM


Well done, Doc. I knew you would have no problem being alliterate.

May as well move on to the third of the trinity...consonance. Good luck!

As far as the rest of you, WHERE ARE YOU??? I haven't gotten assonance from many and moose is already two steps past that. Let's go!!1

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