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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
A masterpiece to mezmerize mayhaps my mind might form, pre-eminent perfection penned par-excellent of norm. Dactyllically delectable, decisive and damn fine, but, having writ such wondrous work dare I declare "Its mine"? Its likely that its lineage would be looked on askance, to curry critics' council cuts a rug I seldom dance. One need no nomenclature not in tune with ones' beliefs, but, back to basics brethren it's oft' best to keep it brief. Presenting one a paradox as poignant as percieved, were I to write such wondrous works, might they not be believed? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just had to pop in for a refill, Doc. Nobody does it better. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I love the alliterations. They just make me smile. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Karen, Always a pleasant surprise to hear from you, thanks. Doc Susan, A smile's worth a thousand words, wait, no that's a picture., O.K. so make it two thousand. Thanks. Doc |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well done, Doc. I knew you would have no problem being alliterate. May as well move on to the third of the trinity...consonance. Good luck! As far as the rest of you, WHERE ARE YOU??? I haven't gotten assonance from many and moose is already two steps past that. Let's go!!1 |
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