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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Envisioned deep within the night on wings of fancy taken flight from comfort of a warm soft bed in hopes of gaining true insight sojourn into where streams are fed the crystal springs of watersheds which cascade through this land of dreams along the trails where spirits tred as if to speak with them it seems immersed in such a world where gleam the paths that poets' souls may take and wonder truly reigns supreme to dream not just for dreamings sake yet of those visions to partake with hopes to forge upon awake a poem as one that "Frost" might make |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Enjoyed this Mr. Moose, Very tight and awesome last quatrian, Frost indeed. KB |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I would like to be able to forge a poem such as YOU would make. Very well done -again your form is perfect and what a beautiful song it makes. THank you, Sir Moose Liz |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Kevin, Thanks. I about wore out my pen on rewriting this one, trying to get it just right. Sometimes it amazes me how difficult it can be to make something sound so simple. Doc Liz, Thanks so much, you're an inspiration to all of us. Doc |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Ok Doc, you gotta slow down. You're making the rest of us look kinda bad here, ya know.  BTW  this was certainly a "good use of your pen." But that is how we did things "before the turn of the century." These days, we use the computer and some word processing program of choice for all that rewriting. That way, you don't harm any trees or polute the landfills with all those used-up pens carcasses  It's true that you may inconvenience a few electrons in the process but they'll get over it, trust me on this  Pete |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Dreamy! Very good, Doc! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
After a night with just four hours of sleep - because I was hanging out at a native American casino nearby... "along the trails where spirits tred..." - I have a real appreciation for this poem this morning. Excellent form and theme as usual, Doc...  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Pete, Thanks. I took your advice and went fishing for a few days. Pure poetry on the water. Doc Denise, A "Frostian" poem does not a sonnet make, but, I'm glad you liked. Doc Nan, Thanks. Would that be Foxwoods or Mohegan? Not that I'm being nosy, just that I have been known to frequent both. BTW, Thanks! Doc |
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