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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Precious Poetry Princess “Pretty,” praise people pertaining to the Poetry Princess. Pretty precious poetry princess dances during dull days with words woven when white winter wanes. Pretty precious poetry princess perfecting prose. Lips lick lyrically lulling lords by bashful bellowing of beauteous ballads beneath bluebird boughs. News never notices none not known now nor never, but beauty brings bright benefits beyond popular people’s proud ponderings prone to profit. Wildest wonderings whenever we see her standing still, staring and stealing scenes. In magical moments of making music move many, she shines as slivers of silver sparkle upon pages printed posing poetry not pretty but bold, beaten and bone chilling chosen by children chiding for truth-telling to teachers treacherous. Masked monsters make money and tragically truth turns rotten forgotten useless Pretty precious poetry princess Salvation of sonnets. Rescue by rhyme. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Ya got me. This one was a right bugger to read aloud, so me hat goes off to you for this elaborate alliteration. Challenge definately well met. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Endlessecho, 1st read through, vague, but interesting. 2nd read through, both the above, but with a concept forming. 3rd read through (I may be a bit slow) if I'm not mistaken you're describing our shared mistress ( and no, I don't mean "Madonna"). Well written, wordsmith, who wields well wroughten weapons with wondrous wit. Doc |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's funny how we have to read and reread when we're being so alliterative, isn't it? Endless-Echoes ever exceptionally... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EndlessEcho~ You did this just wonderfully~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Thank you so much everyone! I really enjoyed this assignment. :-) And to know that such amazing writers I really respect appreciated it - means a lot. It was lots of fun! On to January... YES! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Gorblimey, golly gosh it's good. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
proposing proper prose presents pragmatic problems... properly pronounced proses proudly praised... bravo Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I was BUSY in December. Glad this came up. Good job! |
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