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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2003-12-16 04:20 PM


Mondays' meanderings mostly mean to
torment "Teach" Tuesday 'til "Teach" threatens you.
Wednesday write wierd with wet worchestershire sauce,
Thursday tease "Teach" twenty times 'til she's cross!
Friday finds furious flipped femme fatale!
Saturday script sincere sorries, say "Pal,
Sunday school sermons shall sacrifice when,
Mondays make mischievous mayhem again!"

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Alicat
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1 posted 2003-12-16 05:35 PM


*chuckling* Makes me wonder what Poet Femme Fatale would think of this one, but I must say, Moose Esquire, PhD, that this is one challenge well met, and the days of the week was a good touch.
Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2003-12-17 06:38 PM


Alicat,
An interesting question you raise, one I had thought of myself, but then again, sometimes one must go where the rhyme leads and be prepared to take the consequences, however, I didn't capitalize! (Poet Femme Fatale, if you're reading this, I'll have my legal department fax you a discliamer !)Thanks Alicat.
Doc

Endlessecho
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3 posted 2003-12-18 01:09 PM


Haahaa! Very funny - liked the way you did this using the days. Interesting.  
Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2003-12-18 09:09 PM


Endlessecho,
Thank you. I've a bit of a history with trying to pull some shenanagans in Nan's class ( although, I think that's just a vicious rumor). Glad you got a chuckle.
Doc

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5 posted 2004-01-11 10:24 AM


Vicious rumor indeed.... No matter what the day of the week.... Doc is the quintessential class quipster...
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6 posted 2004-01-11 01:20 PM


Doc~
Me smile BIG~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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