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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Do not protest that we admire a car, There’s little can be altered anyway, It’s Nature’s way to make us what we are. Wise women understand, though it’s bizarre, Our love of shapely lines and curves, so they Do not protest that we admire a car. Good women know they’re better off by far To just accept our lust and they will say It’s Nature’s way to make us what we are. The fancy women at the corner bar, Their lovely curves a feminine bouquet, Do not protest that we admire a car. Most women seem to feel our look won’t mar The beauty of the lines we might survey, It’s Nature’s way to make us what we are. So you, our love, our one and only star, We look and drool without a thought to stray. Do not protest that we admire a car. It’s Nature’s way to make us what we are. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Pete this was great, but I have to tell you (and this is the truth), I divorced one husband so he could spend more time with "his girl" who was a old Thunderbird, and I hope they are living happily ever after. Enjoyed this very much. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Pete, An excellent write, too cool for school! Doc |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Wow! Well written! Just one thought - are villanelle's supposed to have eight syllables per line or is that something that was just coincidence in the ones I've read. Just wondering for future reference. Either way - this sounded great. Put together very nicely. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFL - You never said "what kind" of car??? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey Tool Man...LOL... why isn't this in open, TOO? |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Oh, methinks you have caught me Teach. I'll just have to "look you in the eyes" and admit this really isn't about cars, in the usual sense, at all.  |
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