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Dr.Moose1
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2003-10-17 07:52 PM


A rising tide of silence, heavy, lay
it's muted presence all about the room.
One moment of distraction, on its' way
a tiny paper aircraft launches... zoom!

Un-erringly it soars upon the breeze,
a Lilliputian Luftwaft it appeared
quite out of nowhere piloted by me
that said, "Hello is anybody here?"

Oh, well, it's nothing ventured, nothing gained,
all cleared for landing at Miss Nanners' feet.
"Hey Doc, you know such poetry's insane,
I oughta throw your butt out in the street!"

And, there but for the grace of God go I,
who made a super sonnet aircraft fly.


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Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
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1 posted 2003-10-17 10:23 PM


Doc, I absolutely love it. Who ever said sonnets had to be about mushy love a such as that.

Pete

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2003-10-17 11:04 PM


Pete,
I agree,the form lends itself to so much more.
Thanks .
Doc

Nan
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3 posted 2003-11-16 01:30 PM


This silly super sonnet aircraft flew
Right past my-ambic feet in metered time
It soared upon the winds aloft they blew
And broke the barriers of poets' rhyme...

Its message spanned across the azure sky
"Pentameter" it spewed in ambic feet...
And "Anyone can do it it they try"
A fly-by sonnet can be quite a treat.

Just follow in the path of Doc Moose' flight
Get out your quill, he'll show you how it's done
He's soaring like a goose at lofty height
A super sonnet pilot having fun...

But now he needs to write a villanelle
We workshop folks will think that's really swell...

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2003-11-17 09:47 PM


Nan,
Always a source of encouragement. Your words and wisdom flow upon a higher breeze. Hats off,"Teach",see you round the play-ground.
Doc

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