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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2003-08-30 07:35 PM



Will you still love me when I’m dead
Hold on to memories so dear
Forget the bad things I have said
Will you still love me when I’m dead
And when my humor roams your head
Then you will know that I am here
Will you still love me when I’m dead
Hold on to memories so dear


Got inspired by my Mommy Muys.


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2003 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
1 posted 2003-08-30 09:55 PM


Loved your triolet, Titia.  I bite my tongue on wounding words and I hope that those that slip out will be forgotten.  Neat theme!

Shenachie

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
2 posted 2003-08-31 12:12 PM


Very very nice.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2003-08-31 08:19 PM


Titia, you do these triolets very well. This is wonderful.
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2003-11-05 09:22 PM


Muys is a wonderful inspiration... Listen to that lady - She has much to say to us all...
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