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kayjay
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0 posted 2003-04-07 11:46 PM


Caring is unique

Held in loving trust

Each reflects that love

Reaching for the future

Instances of heartblend

Sharing space and time

How exquisitely we glow




© Copyright 2003 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-08 06:52 AM



How wonderfully you cherish things close to your heart, Kayjay...seems I have a few things to learn from YOU!

kayjay
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2 posted 2003-04-08 09:48 AM


I blush at your kindness,
often stumble in blindness
But try to avoid "hindness"
in writing of "bindness"

Many humble thanks, my friend!

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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3 posted 2003-04-08 02:20 PM


Nice

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4 posted 2003-04-09 10:58 AM


cherishing this one...

regards,
sudhir

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5 posted 2003-04-09 04:11 PM


KayJay~
To acrosticize your thoughts so beautifully, is an art form of much pleasure to read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2003-04-10 09:45 AM


Very well done. And beautiful, too.
Bridget Shenachie
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7 posted 2003-04-17 07:02 PM


Cherish--what a beautiful subject for an acrostic poem!  And you penned it artfully!

Shenachie

kayjay
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8 posted 2003-04-18 10:09 AM


Acrostics can be fun, you see
They're just for you and me
So Aries, friend and Sudhir too
I give my thanks to you
And Marge and 'Chick, you make my day
And Bridget too, I say.

A most gracious and humble thanks to each of you.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Nan
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9 posted 2003-05-01 08:51 AM


Words to cherish indeed - With a little rhymed verse added to the venue... Nicely done, kj...
kayjay
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10 posted 2003-05-01 09:14 AM


Thank you, Nan, for your warm comment.  I'm taking an online poetry course from the college I teach and am getting some wonderful insights for mood and feeling.  Maybe I'll break out of rhyme and meter someday.  Thanks again.  Ken
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11 posted 2003-05-01 09:17 AM


NO..NO..NO..NO.... No breaking out of rhyme and meter allowed here - Nope, nope, nope...

You just keep on what you're doing... Did I mention that I'm an avidly structured poet??

So Ken... What format would YOU like to do in in the workshop for May?..

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