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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-04-06 07:19 PM

W.W.W.W.W. & H.

Wings whispering
Haunting melodies
Oh hear the Angels sing

Wondrous Angels
Hovering over
Angels taking
Troubles over

Worries of the
Heart
Enlightened in the
Night

When you allow
Heavens’ hosts
E’re come in your heart,
Really come in
Ethereal beings all

Worries to
Hasten away
Yes

and (because)

Heaven knows
Only
Wondrous things

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

1 posted 2003-04-07 11:39 PM

Led the way, maestress....this is craftmanship at its finest. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

JP
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

2 posted 2003-04-08 01:06 PM

Excellent

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-04-08 01:48 PM

Just marbellious !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2003-04-09 11:00 AM

so nicely done

Regards,
Sudhir

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

5 posted 2003-04-17 06:59 PM

This is one impressive acrostic with such a gentle touch! Sunshine, your poetry reflects the beauty of the heavens!

Shenachie

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-05-01 08:47 AM

Who, What, When, Where, Why, and How could anyone ever create a better verse with such wisdom?... I like this one lots, Sunshiny one...

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