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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Beauty Beauty is found Everywhere Around Us, if we look Today, tomorrow, or Yesterday . . . . Beauty is a joB Everyone needs to improvE All people, everyone, needs to make A Unified effort, me and yoU To accomplish this. But it's noT Your looks I'm speaking of, but beauty in unitY |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why, I think they're just right! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ethel~ Now is this fun ... or what ? Not nearly as pretty as the rictameter ... but, they'll do for now~  Meet me on the playground ! We got new sand in the sandbox ... buckets of fun ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
garysgirl, I'd have to agree with Marge,they work just fine as they are. You may want to try adding a meter to another one to see if that's what you sense is missing. Doc |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I love these lines: Beauty is a joB Everyone needs to improvE All people, everyone, needs to make A Unified effort, me and yoU To accomplish this. But it's noT Your looks I'm speaking of, but beauty in unitY Eliza Simmons |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I think they are great... regards sudhir |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Me thinks they're great too  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Wow, it's much better than myn...[[hmph!]] lollz. its a BEAUTY! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I didn't see anything missing in this. These are just very well-written acrostics. Enjoyed. I can't hate it because it's BEAUTIFUL! Shenachie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...A double dose of BEAUTY is a good thing... This one feels just right to me, Ethel  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, I am impressed. Two in one.... I enjoyed the thoughts especially in the second one. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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