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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-02-11 03:58 PM



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Who is this that fingers my form
Paints me in silk, satins of choice
Caped in his wild, costumed in warm
"Wearable toy", whispers his voice
Senses released, torrent of storm

M


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(Will Moss)



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Nan
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1 posted 2003-03-09 07:27 AM


This is Octosyllabic verse
Limited to only two rhymes
A theme that's questioning and terse
A structured piece in free style times
You've shown your talents quite diverse

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-03-09 11:37 AM


MsWynter~
Here you go 'octosyllabicing' all over the blackboard !
Koolers, gal~

I happen to believe that you'd be VERY good at the rictameter form too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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