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Tanka this time..

Tammy Blessing
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

0 posted 2002-10-24 02:09 PM

I tried to Haiku
I'm not sure if I got it
But teach Nan said "DO"
So my best shot I gave it
Hope my offering is good

Senryu I tried
Though I think I may have died
Or maybe choka
When my muse went flying by...
Hope I get better at this!

Sorry to be late
Please forgive my stumbling
This is not easy
I really am trying hard
But I think I'm bombing out!!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-10-25 10:05 AM

This is very good!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-10-27 08:20 PM

It's about trying
There's no success without it
Counting syllables
Gives a poet perspective
Writing haiku or tanka

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

3 posted 2002-10-27 10:20 PM

Hi Tammy Blessing!
Your tanka count is perfect.
Your tops in my book.
I enjoyed your offering
And I commend your efforts!

Shenachie

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

4 posted 2002-10-28 09:35 PM

Oh Brigitte and Nan!!
I thank you for replying
Such inspiration!!
Makes me want to keep trying
Maybe I CAN get better!!

Thanks guys! I'm LOVING THIS CLASS!!
Tammy

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